Thiago
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It looks like the book of a beginner. The characters have exaggerated traits, the plots seems forced and predictable, the "magic system" is poorly constructed, the "genius" characters and riddles they have to solve are too simple, …
It looks like the book of a beginner. The characters have exaggerated traits, the plots seems forced and predictable, the "magic system" is poorly constructed, the "genius" characters and riddles they have to solve are too simple, …