The Draft

I'm a big fan of Ainslie Paton, but I don't think this is the series for me. Too much sex, not enough action, and since it's self-published the comma splicing (using a comma to join two independent clauses) is rampant. The woman knows how to create sexual tension, but I like it to be a little less explicit and/or kinky. YMMV. Gains extra points for a billionaire loner virgin hero, but loses a few points for an unnecessary last minute freak-out by the heroine that just prolongs the story and gives the hero one more chance to prove that he's awesome (which by that point we already know).