Kaikeyi

More of a 4.5 but I'm definitely rounding up.

It's not an exaggeration to say that Kaikeyi is my most anticipated book of 2022. I have been excited to read it since the announcement and once that absolutely stunning cover reveal happened, I was only more eager to get my hands on it. And I was so so happy when I won the advance copy in a giveaway. But I'm also a mood reader and despite reading Part One of the book many weeks ago, I put it down and could only get to it now. But I'm glad I was in a much better mood to appreciate this book as it deserves.

First thing that comes to mind how much the cover and the writing complement each other. Not only is this book beautiful on the outside, the writing is absolutely gorgeous and it feels like the author took meticulous care in crafting every single word. The pacing is slow despite the story covering the main character's life from childhood to atleast her 30s and more, but it only accentuates the connection we get to make with the main character. I also liked how the time skips were seamless and it was quite palpable on page that the characters had grown and changed in the time we couldn't get to read about. The magic system with the binding plane and the threads connecting people was also something I found very unique and I was amazed at how well the author was able to integrate these elements into this story. And this lovely writing was made even better by the masterful narration of the audiobook by Soneela Nankani. She is very good at expressing the various emotions of the characters and I was so engrossed listened to it, that I walked more than I usually do as part of my daily routine.

If you have any knowledge of the Ramayana, you know that Kaikeyi is the most vilified person in the epic. But the other view is that it was her destiny to make those choices so that Lord Rama would be able to exercise the duties for which he had taken a mortal form. Which is why I was excited to see how Vaishnavi would create a backstory for Kaikeyi and would we see her in a sympathetic form. And I was right. The author explores through the story the patriarchal world of the times and how women are constrained and sidelined in every matter, the only explanation given that it is ordained in the scriptures by the gods. The author gives us a story of how women can try to work within these constraints to achieve a sense of agency over their own lives, gain some power and maybe help other women with their issues. The one thing I will take away from this book is the female solidarity and how women working together for each other's betterment is so much more powerful than vying for the affections of a man and being against each other. We also have themes of power and destiny vs free will, how the heady feeling of a higher purpose can twist one's notions of justice, and how a strong teacher with wrong ideas can corrupt the minds of even the best of pupils. There are also quite a few important changes from the original epic and while some are the author's choices, some are just little known regional variations of the Ramayana, but I'm now used to reading retellings and reimaginings of epics, so the changes don't bother me, as long as they work for the story the author is trying to tell and they work perfectly here.

Coming to the characters, Kaikeyi is our central figure and she is so very well fleshed out that she feels like a real person. She is the only sister to seven brothers and from her childhood, she is made aware subtly and deliberately that she doesn't have the same choices like her brothers, and it is her duty to do what she has been told by the men in her life. But she is not one to live life according to what others deem it, and endeavors to learn every skill within her purview, so that she can be as independent as possible. She is helped much in this by her twin brother Yudhajit and their's is a beautifully written and loving sibling relationship. They encounter many ups and downs but I loved their bond ultimately remained strong despite distance separating them.

The relationships she carefully inculcates after getting married is also wonderful to read about. She is asexual and maybe even aromantic, but ofcourse these terms aren't relevant to the times and the author does a marvelous job depicting this integral part of her personality without using any labels. That's why I thought her relationship with her husband Dasharatha was written with a lot of care, because despite her sexuality, she values her marriage and utilizes the power being a radnyi gives her to make small and incremental changes in the kingdom, working to solve the problems of people no one cares much about. The bond between the three wives of Dasharatha is also depicted wonderfully from initial apprehension and distance to a gradual development into almost a sibling bond, and this formidable sisterhood is majorly responsible for the reforms that happen across the land. Kaikeyi also has immense love for all children and she hardly shows any partiality towards her own son.

In the second half of the book, the proceedings gradually move to include our main characters of the epic and we get to see the author's versions of Rama, Sita, Ravana and the others. Rama is kind of a negative character in this book and while quite a few reviewers have felt it was wrong to depict him like that, I am not one to gatekeep an author's vision. But his character felt true to the world the author has created. He is conflicted between wanting to listen to his mother's teachings and believing in the words of a charismatic teacher who believes in his godly destiny. He is definitely not easy to like and very misogynistic who wants to adhere to the scriptures, but Kaikeyi believes he can change given time and opportunity and we want to believe in her conviction. Sita on the other hand is not exactly helpless but is implored by the gods that her duty is to follow her husband, even if she doesn't agree with him, and his attitude towards women doesn't help matters. I felt that we didn't get enough page time with her, which is also the same for Ravana, who starts off as much more sympathetic but we see bits of his issues at places, which foreshadows his future descent into evil.

However, this is Kaikeyi's story and it didn't bother me that the heroes and the villains of the epic weren't fleshed out here. The major story of the epic is also not part of this book because it's not relevant to Kaikeyi's life. If you are looking for a mythology reimagining story of one of it's most infamous women, which is feminist and tells us the tale of people who never get talked about, then this book is perfect for you. If you are someone who loves beautiful prose and delicate characterization, and doesn't mind critically looking at the epics we have grown up with and questioning our traditions, then you might find this to your liking. But if you think Lord Rama or Sita or anyone else can't be depicted outside of what we know from Valmiki's Ramayana, then this is definitely not for you. I myself really enjoyed my experience of reading this book - and have so much more to say but want to leave this review at a reasonable length - and I hope I'll get a chance to reread it because I want to annotate this one for a change. And I'm also really looking forward to see what Vaishnavi's next project will be.

DNF. While I know the author is trying to make Kaikeyi “perfect”, it also makes her boring. I understand she was making the contrast of men to women more apparent, but it gives “women are better than men which is why we deserve basic rights” vibes. This is the kind of feminist twist that I think does more harm than good, women deserve better because we're part of humanity - not above it. All that aside, it was just boring, I stopped a little over half way because I was forcing myself to read it and at the end of the day, I want reading to be fun.

Coming from The Song of Achilles, I had high expectations on this retelling of a part of Hindu Mythology and it did not disappoint me. I would recommend this to you in a heartbeat. Of course, T&C apply.

Kaikeyi is a novel written by Vaishnavi Patel in which we hear the story of Kaikeyi, one of the stepmothers of Rama. All my life I have only known her as the “jealous stepmother”. But this book offers more character to her and she might not be what we all perceive.

Now, there are so many new things I learnt from this book. This book challenged my understanding of Ramayana too. But hey, there is no harm in reading multiple perspectives. Vaishnavi Patel did a fantastic job writing this beautiful prose. Her writing is such that you are all ears to hear the story of Kaikeyi and get to the next chapter as soon as possible. What surprised me the most was how Rama was described. Now, I do not know how inconsistent Kaikeyi is with Ramayana, but it does a fantastic job of presenting Kaikeyi's story.

If you are someone who likes to see mythologies in the space of literary fiction, you would like it. I should tell you that this book is not as poetic as The Song Of Achilles. So yeah, that's the only thing I would tell you before you read it. Go for this one. It is a home run!

I'm convinced Patel puts actual crack in her books because I'm left craving more from her every time I finish her stories. I had to sit for a while after devouring the last three parts of this in one sitting and really contemplate what it means to be a woman. My biggest fear is having a sense of impending doom and nobody listening to me so I was really feeling it for this one. Kaikeyi was the original girl's girl and I'll stand by that.

it was aight

Great retelling of an underserved character but pretty tedious prose

3.5

Moving, sensitive, thoughtful, and pretty badass. Although it starts off with a YA feel, it’s not: this is (mostly but not always) emotionally complex. Tough moral questions and decisions. Strong themes of personal responsibility, betrayal, forgiveness. And feminist AF.

Impossible not to be reminded of The Book of Longings: mythologically-inspired fanfic from a female POV. That’s a really tough genre. The constraints are absolutely rigid, so the author has to be careful to work within the gaps. I know nothing of Hindu mythology, so it was reassuring to read the Author’s Note at the beginning in which she describes her familiarity with the canon and the care she took to remain within it. She also has a remarkable postscript in the Goodreads reviews. Read both. I think they show her to be a person of admirable intelligence and ethics. (Despite those, I see some religiofanatic GR reviewers have gotten their “feelings hurt.” I see that as an added bonus.)

The (not a spoiler) Binding Threads gimmick was intriguing. Patel used it a little more than I cared for, and often uncomfortably, but overall effectively. Any power lends itself to abuse, and I see that as part of the author’s point. I really, really loved the relationship dynamics, the first-person narrator’s imperfections, her recognitions of kindness in others. There is a good deal of evil in this book (*cough* “pious sages” *cough) but much more decency and nobility.

I enjoyed seeing Kaikeyi as a woman who chooses power over freedom. She defies convention when it comes to the gods because they've never helped her.  She's also hypocritical, stubborn, and manipulative. She's great as the anti-hero.  But all the other characters felt so one dimensional, which was disappointing because we know they're also conflicted.

The book also felt longer than it actually was and I was hoping for more action to help break up the long sequences of domestic drama. 

I don't know if this ties into actual mythology, but this is one of those stories where the myth is told from some else's perspective.

CAWPILE SCORE
C-8
A-7
W-9
P-8
I-8
L-9
E-9
TOTAL-8.29/10

What an interesting book. As we follow the life of Kaykeyi I can't help but applaud her desire to be free and to do good for othersCAWPILECharactersSo many characters. Following Kaykeyi on her journey is rewarding, and I never felt it obvious that we only see one part of the “whole” character.AtmosphereThe world feels real and lived in with choices affecting things to come in ways both expected and unexpected. WritingGood writing, you could say its more telling than showing, but the story is being told to us by KaykeyiPlotFollows a myth, good plot, good twists, good stakesInvestmentReally wanted to keep reading after about 35%LogicGood choices based on circumstances, nothing felt unearnedEnjoymentI have really really enjoyed this book. And especially enjoyed this with the view of a parent wanting the best for their children, and that sometimes what is best isn't what is most pleasant.
I will be talking about it on Libromancy https://libromancy.podbean.com/ on 04/30/2023

this is the most stunning book i've ever read

So I know I just said I'm done with feminist mythological retellings, but we all knew that was a lie didn't we? Sure this book has its problems, but it was really the world of the binding plane that captured my heart. Also in reading this it got me researching the Ramayana and I learned about something new which is always fun. And it led to a decent book club discussion.

I want to preface this review by saying that I do not know the original story of Kaikeyi, so I do not know how it holds up to that. My thoughts here are purely based on this story alone.

As most people that have been following me for a while know, I absolutely love mythological retelling. This one was no exception. Most of the retelling I have read have been Greek, so it was so refreshing to read this one from a different culture.

This book follows Kaikeyi, a misunderstood woman who just wants to make a place for herself and other women in the world. This book follows her life, from young childhood to far into her adulthood.

I found all of the characters to just be so well rounded and all of the interpersonal relationships to really grow Kaikeyi's story. We got a really unique view on these relationships because Kaikeyi has the ability to go into the Binding Plane, which only she can see, and where she can view the different bonds she has with people and how strong they are. She can also manipulate these bonds to get people to bend her way. She learns from a young age that this can be manipulated too strongly and she can completely sever bonds accidentally. This story follows her as she tries to toe the line of convincing and manipulating.

I thought this book did such an incredible job of exploring feminism, family, and motherhood. I would highly recommend this book to anyone that loves mythology.

“If you ask, ‘Why yet another Ramayana?'
I'd say that in this world, for all times
everyone eats the same food every day,
but the taste of it is one's own.” (Vishwanatha Satyanarayana)

5 stars! A new favorite ♥️

5 stars! A new favorite ♥️

This book is nearly 500 pages, but I was absorbed the whole time. It's been compared to Circe, but it reminded me more of Half Sick of Shadows by Laura Sebastian (which I liked better!), and I loved how it introduced me to a new cultural myth.