Royally In Trouble

This gets a 4 ONLY because I enjoyed the bit of suspense through it. I loved how their story ended happily. I thought the ending was good, even though it was too quick to tie up in my opinion. I feel like a huge part of the book could have been rewritten and it would have been so much better.


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What do I mean by that? The whole thing with Lily and Evan did not need to happen. What should have happened (IN MY OPINION) was that Lily should have known that Keller would have never left her, remembered the threats and told Lara and Ottar and they should have spent those months (that shouldn't have been months, but weeks) looking for Kellar. Everything else was fine, but that whole separation and going through feelings because of lack of communication just could've been different.