Glitch

It was pretty good, nothing crazy. A few parts had me giggling and kicking my feet

Started this because I heard from Reddit it was all smut no plot.
Which it is, but it isn't good smut.

It's cringe, he calls her Kitty every 3 seconds, it's insta-love/insta-move in together.

1/5

What a shit show. And not in a good way. The dirty talk was boring and cringy, the writing was horrible as if written by a teenager and the spicy scenes were over the top and overdramatic. Okay, they're both insatiable but who the fack comes 15 times in a row with no breaks and then isn't tired or sore even a little bit? Come on.

The whole Kitty thing was cringy, I hated that. Especially the exaggerated “Heyyyyyyyy” Did this book have no editor? The dialogue was either stilted or over the top, there was no in-between. And the weird drama with her pedophilic ex-boyfriend? Yeah, CONTENT/TRIGGER WARNING: her ex has a child p*rn on his computer AND he installed a program that recorded her in ber without her knowledge. That was COMPLETELY out of nowhere and wasn't even addressed afterward, just that he was arrested. Like what? You dump this problematic shit and then don't even deal with it properly? Ugh.

Another scene that stuck with me which was so weird: she puked and then he kissed her. Almost immediately after. She didn't even wash her teeth or even drink water or anything! They just went straight to kissing? What the heck?

And don't even get me started on romance. So they're online ‘friends” who know nothing about each other's lives because THEY DON'T TALK, NOT REALLY but they're suddenly in love, and after 3 days of non-stop sex they suddenly move in together? What the hell.

If I could 0 points I would. But I actually finished this horrible book and I always give the finished book 1 star. Though this wattpad like writing doesn't deserve that.

2.5 stars. Fan-fiction quality.

This book is mostly smut. Thin plot. Basically porn. It was enjoyable, but I would not describe it as a “good book”.

meh... lacks depth

This book had potential to be a great story. It felt rushed and lacked depth. The initial relationship went from 3-5 days then jumped to a year in. There is minimal character development, I didn't get to know the characters at all. The spicy scenes were just ok some were unrealistic and ridiculous. I doubt I'll read the second book in this series or any other book by this author.