amazing premise but i can't get over that writing style, my head HURTS

September 2, 2022
June 21, 2022

both mcs were honestly written like 16 yos, they just seemed way too corny

none of the twists really did it for me, & honestly i would have dnf'd it if i didnt pick up the audiobook. the random ramblings would've been too tedious to go though

overall its a 2.5

September 28, 2023
April 23, 2023
December 4, 2022
October 9, 2021

3.5

it was okay, except for sk's usual excessive descriptions/going off subject but oh well

July 27, 2023

Slow, too slow to my taste. Really tried to enjoy it but couldn't

January 7, 2022

Got me feeling all type of emotions, mostly anxiety & left me empty.

Literally don't know how to feel about the ending, there's a hint of sadness, melancholy but a whole lot of nothingness, as if my soul got emptied.

Definitely recommend !

September 16, 2021

TOO MUCH BABBLING, STEPHEN KING LEVEL OF DESCRIPTIONS BUT 100X WORSE I CANT DO IT

April 2, 2023

this is a very disheartening dnf because i was soooo hyped about this book

but the writing style is just not for me, too dense too confusing & all over the place

and too many scifi shit going on with no simple explanation

May 5, 2023
August 13, 2022

a fucking mess

August 10, 2022
September 27, 2021

this is making wattpad look like la crème de la crème of literature wtf

January 2, 2023
July 12, 2022

im so disappointed

the novella was boring, the dialogues felt unnatural & the writing pretentious

its so crazy because i LOVED his other book (title is too long but you know which one)

but yeah, i literally finished it out of spite

September 9, 2022
October 16, 2022

too much rambling i was BORED, i guess his writing style's just not for me

November 25, 2021

hate stories exclusively built on STUPID characters, things have...spoke is still a masterpiece tho <3

August 8, 2023

dnf got bored, might go back at some point

July 15, 2022

i definitely get the creativity fatigue he talked about. the stories were meh, except for the weeping lady that was really good

September 2, 2022
July 24, 2021

don't like the writing style

June 18, 2022
May 4, 2023