Izzo
Unyielding
The book would be better if it didn't have so much crap about every woman wanting to sleep with the MC, not only is it kind of ridiculous (and it adds nothing useful to the story), but it slows down the progression of the better parts of the story to a crawl. It starts to get to the point where I have to work to keep reading and not give up on the book all together. I much prefer the part of the book that switches to a woman MC because it doesn't have all that crap.
The book would be better if it didn't have so much crap about every woman wanting to sleep with the MC, not only is it kind of ridiculous (and it adds nothing useful to the story), but it slows down the progression of the better parts of the story to a crawl. It starts to get to the point where I have to work to keep reading and not give up on the book all together. I much prefer the part of the book that switches to a woman MC because it doesn't have all that crap.