Welcome to Ludus

Starting with the good:
The narration was great. The GameLit parts were sparse, but I liked what was there. The adventure elements of the story were a lot of fun.

However, on the negative side, the romance was particularly, painfully adolescent. But the thing that was truly off-putting was that the morality was sometimes... disturbing. If there's another brutal rapist character in the next book, I won't be reading it.

Every LitRPG book I've ever read is just a horrible mess, filled with cliche upon cliche and amateur writing, and this is no different.