Unmarriageable
Ratings17
Average rating3.6
Pakistan is a great setting for a modernized Pride and Prejudice. The values match up pretty well to Regency England. Even knowing where the story is going, Unmarriageable is an engrossing drama.
But I have trouble buying that an English literature teacher who teaches P&P to high school girls is not going to notice her family matches up to the Bennet family exactly.
The audiobook is read by the author, so you get the Pakistani accent adding to the story. Minor characters from P&P have more presence in this book and names range from close to original - “Darsee” instead of “Darcy” - to completely random - “Pinky” for Mrs Bennet. I got confused during the more crowded scenes.
This was an enjoyable spin on P and P that taught me a lot about modern Pakistani marriage customs too. I liked that every female character got her own business in the end!
I really wanted to like this book. The last maybe 20% of it pulled it up from a 1-star to a 2-star rating for me, because it got more interesting when they finally moved past all the long drawn out back stories and interacted with people (outside of the Binat girls' constant infighting). It just felt like so much backstory and world-building, but very little actual character interactions and meaningful character development. The development that occurred was mostly just sprung on us, vs. something the characters worked through. Sigh. Really fun idea for a P&P adaptation, but mostly it felt like a slog.
I loved how the author translated/interpreted/not sure of the word here the Pride & Prejudice story into modern-day Pakistan (or modern-ish, this was set in 2000-2001, and I'm not sure whether that was so cell phones weren't widely available or for some other reason). I thought the changes in characterization from the original were also fascinating - the analogue to Anne de Bourgh is much more fun and plays more of a role here, while the equivalent to Charlotte Lucas is a little bit more scheming. I really enjoyed being able to view a familiar story through a different culture's lens. I'd love to see someone review this and [b:Ayesha at Last 43124133 Ayesha at Last Uzma Jalaluddin https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1544037862l/43124133.SX50.jpg 57683370] together, because this mini-trend is resulting in some wonderful books.
Very clever retelling of P&P, although Kamal is more successful at translating the classic 19th century British scenes into 21st century Pakistan than at creating realistic characters. Darcy/Darsee especially wasn't a strong enough character to make much of an impression, but the Bennett/Binat family and Charlotte Lucas/Sherry Looclus were more well-developed (Kamal notes in the afterword that Charlotte Lucas was her favorite P&P character, and she generously gives Sherry Looclus a more unequivocally happy marriage than her namesake). Anyone looking for a P&P version that is heavy on the romance will be disappointed; the emphasis is much more on Pakistani society and how the pressure on women to marry in order to be considered worthwhile is still very much with us today.
I received this book from NetGalley to review, and enjoyed it! This is a retelling of Pride and Prejudice in a Pakistani setting. The characters were varied, and there were many that I could see in my own life here in the U.S., proving once again how universal families and relationships are. There is much to think about with the expectations forced on us as women, as members of families, and as members of communities, and with the changeable nature of what is acceptable based on your station in society or who your family is. I enjoyed this book and the author is skilled at bringing the reader to the setting of the story and making you feel like you understand what it is like there.
I have always enjoyed reading Jane Austen retellings and reimaginings because it's fascinating to see how her thoughts and ideas translate into our modern world or how modern authors can interpret them. I have liked a few and been disappointed by others, so I knew not to have a lot of expectations from this one. But Pride and Prejudice set in 21st century Pakistan held too much appeal and I couldn't stop myself from requesting the ARC. And I am so glad to report that this book exceeded all my expectations in a delightful way.
There is not much I can say about the individual characters because the author stays pretty close to the original - in terms of both the plot and the characterization. However, making both Jena and Alys unmarried women in their 30s who take up the teaching profession to help their family make ends meet, and then thrive in their independence was a deft touch. The Binat family has also extensively traveled abroad and their kids educated in international schools before the downturn in their fortunes, hence it's quite easy to believe Alys as a modern well read woman who loves her country and culture, while also being very critical of a hypocritical society that puts undue pressure on young women to be virtuous and marry and serve their husbands but the men are never expected to respect or value their partners.
The whole book is full of social commentary about the class and societal prejudice that felt all too real. I've seen enough of the snobbery and gossip mongering and the too much importance given to people with money, both in the Indian media and in my real life; and even the belief that a woman's life is only fulfilled by getting married and bearing children and not by being a person of intellect and with a voice of her own - all of this hit too close to home and that's what makes this book so special. There were some great conversations in the book which resonated with me - about finding home and identity when you've grown up with foot in your culture and traditions and the other foot trying to adapt to more western sensibilities; about how we as a country can better celebrate our history while also putting the lasting effects of colonization into context; about trying to voice an opposing opinion regarding the place of women in a society that tries to cast them into a mould.
The other strength of this book and one that I truly enjoyed was the very “desi” feel of it. I'm not a Muslim nor Pakistani, so I won't comment on how true that rep is but it did feel quite similar to some of the Pakistani TV dramas I've watched. But the culture, food and language are still very much similar to my own and it was such a delight to read about all of that in such glorious detail. All the wedding ceremonies and clothes that were described made me want to run to India and buy some nice extravagant clothes 🤩🤩 The narration about all the food in detail throughout the book is mouth watering and reading about everyone enjoying these delicacies made me want to join in all the fun. And I really adored the generous use of Urdu all through the book - it's nice to see some familiar words in conversations and especially the use of famous proverbs. The book also lots of nods to Austen's works, right from the first line to the last and some other prominent authors, so be ready for some nice recommendations.
Despite how much I enjoyed reading this one, it's not perfect. I really loved the few subplots that the author incorporated, but for the most part it's too close to the original. The romance between Alys and Darsee also felt very rushed and I would have liked to see them interact more and fall in love slowly. However, the society and world of P&P does translate well into the modern Pakistani setting and the characters felt very believable. The story is also very funny and entertaining and I couldn't put it down.
If you love Jane Austen and like reimagining her stories, then do give this one a try. And if you are from the subcontinent, then I definitely recommend this book. You will really really enjoy this desi Pride and Prejudice.