The straight razor cure

Mehhhhhhhhhhhhh.

I'd describe it as some kind noir detective fantasy story. I had an American narrator voice in my head whilst I read the story, and it just irritated me constantly. Just not my cup of tea at all. I felt it was like an American Police Drama Detective story, but someone had gone through with “Find and Replace” for all the modern real world things and replaced them with words to make it more “Fantasy”.

I think it could have been far shorter than it was, too much fluff. A meh ending, and the story didn't really deliver on what it seemed to promise early on. Some good dialogue, and some cool ideas. But overall just a whole bag of meh. I was in a rush to get it finished.