The Prince's Dearest Guards

Read like bad fanfic. Not that there's anything wrong with bad fanfic, but, I had to pay for this.

Oh how I wished for this novella to be better than it is. The prince, the main character of the story, acts like a 14year old on anime TikTok; constantly stumbling over his words, blushing and hanging his head at everything. Which is a shame! The dysphoria scenes were very greatly written, and the smut was pretty okay too. That does make it worse to me that theres a sizeable age gap between the main character and his lovers. Also, the writing itself just wasnt all that good. Theres commas where they shouldnt be, commas are missing where they should be, sentences trail off and it gets worse as the book goes on. The typesetter for this book should also be taught a lesson (literally) because sometimes the first sentence of a paragraph will be centred for no reason...? Honestly, this book would be an easy 4 stars if the author had a good editor and didnt rely on his Wattpad expertise

PS: I see many people saying this book has a diverse cast of characters which is a little bonkers to me - three cis men, one trans man, all of them white. One other man mentioned, one other woman mentioned. Is that really diverse?