The Forgotten Beasts of Eld

That was so beautiful! 
I was never a fan of flowery and lyrical prose in books. But this book, THIS. Patricia somehow made me engrossed in her writings without my knowledge. Every sentence pulled me into the story. Sybel's story was wonderful! A tale about love, revenge and letting go. Just beautiful.

This was a blind date with a book I received earlier in the year and I wish I read it sooner. It may be a short book but it is so beautifully written I'll be thinking of this one for a while.

4 stars, Metaphorosis reviews

Sybel, the third in a series of mages living alone atop Eld Mountain, and caring for the legendary creatures they have summoned, finds her life disturbed by a man with a child. Reluctant at first to take it from him, she finds that both man and child change her life beyond anything she expected.

I first read this a very long time ago, and didn't care for it. I wasn't then the ardent fan of McKillip I later became, and I found the story slow and unfocused. Reading the story decades later, through older, wiser eyes, I concur with both those early judgments, but see beyond them to the beautiful prose that McKillip almost always brings along.

The story isn't really about the forgotten beasts. They're an interesting backdrop, but more decorative than crucial. And their captivity - peaceably enslaved by the mages, seemingly just for the sake of collection - gets very little attention. Instead, the story's about Sybel and the disruption caused to her life. Here, the story is recognizably McKillip - the language is lush and dreamy, the characters unsure but interesting. The emotions in the book are less well balanced than in McKillip's later books. That has its benefits - the story veers toward a darker side than we usually see - but also left me often with a feeling that the story was slightly off-kilter, and would have benefited from the author's later experience with storytelling.

There's also a somewhat disturbing disregard for secondary characters, whom the protagonists assign fates without a second thought. It's a hero-centric approach that later books largely avoided.
There's also a somewhat disturbing disregard for secondary characters, whom the protagonists assign fates without a second thought. It's a hero-centric approach that later books largely avoided. On the other hand, there are tantalizing references to riddles, and a Riddlemaster...

While not the best of McKillip's books, it's far better than my faded memory of it. Just approaching my teens, I suppose I was simply too young to appreciate McKillip's fabulous prose, which even in this early book is well in evidence. It's a beautifully written, if flawed, book in a long series of beautiful novels by McKillip.