The Baby Dragon Café

This book has so much potential, but the writing style is closer to YA or middle grade. It also feels like an early draft with many good ideas, but nothing is built upon and any tension is over in 1 chapter; there is a significant amount of tell, not show, and a lot of repetition that should have been edited out. The comparisons to legends and Lattes and the Pumpkin Spice Cafe are misleading; the dragons seem to be more set dressing, and the romance reads like middle grade, minus the slightly “spicy” scene.
Also, if you don't like mouth noises, the male narration isn't for you for several chapters it was so distracting.