Ratings10
Average rating3.6
Book 1: 3/5
Book 2 3.5/5
Book 3: 4/5
Book 4: 4/5
Book 1 is by far the weakest link in this series, but I'm happy I stuck with it. It took about halfway through book 2 to really get me invested and I binged the rest of the series after that.
So the start got whiffed for me, but after that it turns into a fun adventure-cultivation story. The characters are great and continue being fleshed out. Storyline and writing are generally solid. MC's powerset starting from halfway through book 2 becomes pretty cool.
my main problems:
1. Her early power doesn't feel earned, just given for free
2. The core fix and resulting power were too quick and easy
3. The trauma of childhood with a broken core wasn't established enough, which makes the resulting
character development not work great.
4. “big bad guy” wasn't established enough. We don't really have any reason to hate the guy except
that the author tells us he's the bad guy.
CAWPILE SCORE
C-5
A-7
W-6
P-7
I-8
L-7
E-8
TOTAL-6.86/10
Great Prologue, good worldbuilding and I like the way the magic is set up. Interested to see where it goes from here.
Sometimes power levels felt a bit inconsistent, good plot. Nice atmosphere
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CAWPILE
Characters
Raysha is a great character. Strong drive.
Hlaya and Octavian seem to have inconsistent power levels or it feels like they do.
Atmosphere
Good, interesting to have out
Writing
Good
Plot
Investment
Logic
Nothing felt out of place for me
Enjoyment
I did enjoy this book
Misc
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