Shorefall
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4,5 stars ⭐️
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I liked Foundryside well enough, even if I had some mixed feelings about how it blended fantasy and sci-fi elements. It had a strong premise, an intricate magic system, and a compelling heist-driven plot. So I approached Shorefall with cautious optimism, hoping to find a similar balance. There were so many elements I should have liked: the intricate magic system, the high-stakes conflict, and the return of characters who were undeniably well-crafted. And yet, despite all of that, I just didn’t care and I struggled to stay invested.
The story picks up a few years after the events of Foundryside. Sancia and her allies have built something new—a company that aims to use scriving for the benefit of the people, rather than leaving it in the hands of the merchant houses. But their progress is quickly overshadowed by the return of an ancient, godlike figure, one who threatens to upend everything they’ve fought for. What follows is a relentless battle of escalating stakes, as reality itself is rewritten in ways that feel increasingly impossible to contain.
It’s hard to pinpoint exactly why Shorefall didn’t resonate with me. On paper, it has everything that made the first book interesting, but somehow, as a package, it just didn’t land. The story escalates at a breakneck pace. So it becomes difficult to stay grounded. The tension never lets up, and while I generally enjoy high stakes, this felt like strapping into a rocket that never stopped accelerating. We were already operating at a high level of tension from the start, and then it just kept pushing further and further into the stratosphere—until I found myself detached from it all. Instead of feeling thrilling, it became overwhelming.
The characters, too, left me cold. They’re well-crafted in a conceptual sense—complex, interesting, and distinct—but I struggled to feel anything for them. No one felt particularly relatable or compelling, and their struggles—while monumental—never quite reached me on an emotional level. It wasn’t that they were poorly written; rather, I just couldn’t connect with them in a meaningful way.
The most striking and memorable scene for me was when someone was forced to cut off their thumb. In the grand scheme of the story, it’s an insignificant moment, but it was so well written—so visceral—that it stuck with me far more than anything else. It’s a bit disappointing that, in a book filled with intricate worldbuilding and interesting characters, this is the one thing that truly lingered in my mind.
I wanted to like Shorefall, and in isolation, I can acknowledge that it does a lot of things well. But as a whole, it didn’t click for me. I’ll still be reading the third book—if only to finish the series—but I’m hoping it finally gives me clarity on what hasn’t been working for me in these books.
The second installment to the trilogy... Wow, this packed a punch (more like a lot!) The plot was great and little twists and turns that made me expect things, and it came right at me, still hitting me in the face LOL It kind of ends off as a cliffhanger as the war is really just beginning between the Foundrysiders and the entities, so definitely continuing [b:Locklands 55535618 Locklands (The Founders Trilogy, #3) Robert Jackson Bennett https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1630713654l/55535618.SY75.jpg 86603319]!!
Doesn't have the same “magic” as the first one but a very fun and thrilling read nonetheless!
I am a huge fan of RJBs fantasy output. His two main series both tap unexpected and intriguing niches within the genre. Whilst Divine Cities has some distinct crossover with the horror work that he started off with, The Founders Trilogy is a much more pure fantasy with one of the best realized hard magic systems I have seen. Added to this is the very well crafted camaraderie that has been put in place between the main characters.
Shorefall pick up where Foundryside left off. The gang have managed to change the outlook towards the major houses and provide an alternative model towards glyph making. They are all set on undermining the existing society from beneath, overthrowing the great houses, when a full blown Heirophant appears on the seen.
From here, they get caught in a conflict that is much older than them, pawns being used by two ancient and powerful beings. This conflict makes up the majority of the book, and the degrees of moral greyness it throws up are fascinating. Ultimately the story here is a study on power and human nature - how power corrupts and the tendency to slip towards violence to try to control others.
Big themes in a big story, told extremely well. Very enjoyable!
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1.5 stars
This book giga jumped the shark
Worst parts of sci fi shit with worst parts of fantasy
Only redeeming thing is that i like the names of the characters
4.5/5 - I enjoyed this book a lot more than the first and I'm looking forward to completing the trilogy. This book made the first book feel like really just a big set-up for the world-building and magic system. The action was fast and furious, and the world, which was already compelling in the first book, now seems a lot more fleshed out to me in this one and made me genuinely invested in what was happening. The first book set up the main characters' backstories so you don't get too much of that here, instead you have a better sense of how their ongoing dynamics as they work with each other and play off each other's strengths and weaknesses. Overall, a really brilliant sequel that properly utilised everything it set up in the first book.
This book had some info dumpy sections at the beginning to attempt getting the reader up to speed, but honestly I would not by any means recommend beginning the trilogy from this instalment. The first book is still important to set up the basics, but while I found the first book too info-dumpy and “telling, not showing”, this sequel thankfully does not suffer from those flaws. The action starts very early and very quickly, and I can imagine first-time readers to have a hard time catching up since the world and magic system is by no means simple or easy to understand.
I really liked how much more I get the magic system in this one now too. It finally occurred to me that this world is basically The Matrix but set in a medieval fantasy-ish setting and framed in medieval fantasy-ish terms like “scrivings” and “sigils” instead of what we as modern readers would be more likely to understand them as: “programs” and “codes”. One plot twist in the middle of the book could also be re-framed as such: When Valeria creates a “back door” into Sancia's consciousness for herself without her permission, isn't this basically a Trojan horse hack?
I don't mind Sancia, but I'm not a super huge fan of her so overall I'm glad that we spent a lot more time on the “found family” element of the story. I love ensemble casts and this one delivers with the dynamics between Sancia, Berenice, Orso, and Gregor being put to the test with all the various challenges they face. I also like that we see more of Sancia and Berenice's chemistry here - instead of just simply being told that they love each other all the time, we kinda see why they do.
The plot was also really engaging - there was a central Big Bad Villain, but then we're kept guessing about what exactly are his motivations, can we trust him, and more importantly, can we trust the people who are apparently helping our main characters? The twists that came around in the second half of the book were also really fun. Some were predictable, some had a long lead-up to it so the moment things started playing out you already knew what was going to happen at the end of that particular chapter, but some really caught me super off-guard in a satisfying manner - my favourite was finding out that Clef was actually Crasedes's father instead of his son. I really bought into thinking that Clef was Crasedes's son, even though something didn't sit right with me with that theory - Clef's voice has never been child-like and he's always spoke to Sancia with an air of an adult. Crasedes didn't strike me as a child either so it never occurred to me that it'd be the other way round.
Some other thoughts about the ending: I'm so sad that Orso and Gregor are pretty much gone. Really, really enjoyed the 4-man Foundrysiders telepathic show but it didn't last. I didn't really care so much about Ofelia's sacrifice - it was pretty predictable and I kinda wish it had played out in a different way - but man, Orso's one was so heartbreaking, I loved him. I don't really get why Gregor + Valeria = Tevanne though. The ending isn't exactly a cliffhanger but it also didn't really round things up in a 100% satisfying manner, although I guess they've deliberately left a lot of loose ends to carry on to the next book.
If you enjoy medieval steampunk fantasy with a Matrix/coding-like magic system, definitely check this series out, but start with the first book and not this one.
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Quick review - great characters who continue to grow and develop, each having their own values and moral compass.
Plot continued to push on, twists and turns throughout (I called the twist with a key character), however there's a lot that takes you by surprise.
Ending leaves you wanting more, and I for one cannot wait for the conclusion.
4/5 stars
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As you all know, I absolutely adored the first entry into the Founders Trilogy, Foundryside. It is a immensely satisfying read, with an enormously unique magic system and world. Well, Robert Jackson Bennett takes all of those components from the first book and puts them to work in Shorefall.
While not as tightly plotted as the first book, Shorefall is still a wonderwork of fantasy writing. The stakes are upped just the right amount in comparison to the first book. The main villain of the series so far, the first of the heirophants, is bone-chillingly terrifying in the best ways. You really are scared of him while you read — there's no second guessing, no well-maybe-he's-right in this book. He's just flat out terrifying, and you hope-hope-hope that our heroes save the day. The author did an amazing job of showing just enough to prove that this villain is not someone to underestimate.
The reason I docked a star is something that happens towards the middle-end of the book. Spoiler is regarding Sancia and Berenice and something they do together. I'm still not sure how I feel about the twinned-mind thing. It was supposed to be temporary but it seems fairly permanent by the end of the novel. Then again, it isn't all that clear on how much time actually passes between them twinning and the end of the book. First read through of this book, it didn't bother me. Second read through, it's sort of...hm. It feels convenient? Like I get what the author is going for, and where it will probably end up, but. IDK. Let me know if you feel the same way!
The best part of Shorefall, though, is the reveal of who the villain actually is. I will not spoil this because it is so chef's-kiss perfect that I don't want to ruin it for anyone. But you really don't see it coming until it's right on top of you, and then everything sort of clicks into place.
I'm now hurrying onto my ARC of the last book in this trilogy, Locklands. Let's hope it's just as good as the first two books.
This book starts with a large time jump of around 3 years from the end of “Foundryside”. It starts off action packed and never really slows down. The entire novel is less than I week I believe. This book improved over the first book since we didn't have to have the entire magic system broken down for us again. We already know the gist of how magic works, so we can really hop right into it. The drawback for me was that certain parts felt slow. I think part of that is because I had a hard time connecting to these characters throughout both books so far. I understand their motivations and I love the setting of this book, but I have a hard time caring about the ultimate fates of these characters.
As for the plot, this book was WILD. This magic system is so complex and malleable, and it is so exciting to have no idea what they are going to be able to accomplish next. The villain characters are flawed and complex. The twists and turns this plot took were unpredictable and fun. The ending blew my mind and left me anxious for book 3, which has no release date yet.
All in all, I really enjoyed this book. I think the plot and the magic system are incredibly well thought out and imaginative. However, this won't be added to my favorites because I just couldn't connect to the characters in the way I want to in my books.
Pros: lots of twists, great characters, interesting magic system
Cons:
Three years have passed since the events at the Mountain. Orso, Berenice, Sancia and Gregor have created a library for scrivers in Foundryside. But after celebrating a major acquisition, Valeria, the hierophantic construct, warns them that Crasedes Magnus, first hierophant, is being reborn. The gang jumps into action, using their various skills to stop the most powerful entity in existence from enacting his plan.
This is a real rollercoaster of a read. There are so many twists as the group faces off against several powerful enemies. I was really shocked by some of things that happened.
The characters were great and felt fully developed. Berenice and Sancia have such a loving relationship. While it was unfortunate seeing Gregor's pain, I appreciated that his unresolved trauma was dealt with.
The author continues to do interesting things with the unique magic system. I loved seeing the various ways twinning could be used.
This book didn't wrap us as nicely as the previous one, nor does it end on a similar positive note. While it's not exactly a cliffhanger, it will leave you wishing the third book in the series was already out.
Foundryside, the first book in this trilogy, was really well-balanced. It told an engaging story, was populated with unique characters, and took place in a vibrant setting. While I'm still taken with this world and the city of Tevanne, most of what I enjoyed about the first book was left behind.
I had been intrigued (and somewhat confused) by scriving, the reality-altering magic system introduced in Foundryside. Because of its complexity, each act of scriving requires considerable explanation and exposition. Shorefall doubles down on scriving and this magic is so integral to the plot that if you're not on board with it you'll be left searching for other things to enjoy.
Unfortunately, the characters seem stagnant and there's no room for them to breathe amongst the massive set pieces and high stakes of the story. In many ways, this felt like a trilogy capping novel instead of a middle book, so it's unclear how the momentum will carry over for another book and I'm unsure if I'll be along for the ride.
In my Foundryside review, I mentioned that the magic system was one of the best and most original I've seen. Well, in this one Bennett takes it to the next level, running through all kinds of logical consequences and dazzling implications with glee. It's typical of a book that builds on its predecessor in all the right ways, raising the stakes, deepening character relationships, developing complicated magical and political ideas, blowing up even more stuff, and one that cements my view that Robert Jackson Bennett is the best fantasist working right now. The concluding part is now officially my most awaited book of the next couple of years.
ARC provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
There is a lot I found fascinating about Bennett's prose from reading the first book in this series, Foundryside. He created a hard magic system that was inspiring to me as a writer, in turn I found insanely inspiring this time around with Shorefall.
This was a book series I have been etching to read more in and I was fortunate enough to read this before it's release, which at this point I'd say didn't disappoint.
In between the pouring of guts and steam-powered machinery in this story, there was only one moment where the pacing felt low and relaxed. Honestly, I expect a few slow downs with info dumps through an epic fantasy, and with Shorefall I felt it necessary to give a single moment to pause and look around at the alluring world. There is something particularly beautiful about ravaging politics and people who are on the edge of their demise.
The book was pretty damn awesome.