Saving Raven
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What happens when a frail young woman falls for a half male winged siren?
Nothing exciting happens in Erie Cove, home to a community of supernaturals greeted each morning by the dark cloud hanging over the town. And there’s no reason to think spring break will be any different.
Cayden, a half-blooded male winged siren committed to spending his break working in the Mummy’s Tomb, the family cafe. In an effort to please his father and bring patrons in on a Friday night, he agrees to perform for the customers.
His father is convinced this could be the start to a new beginning for his son. Cayden just wants to get it over with.
Plagued with a rare blood disease, Raven and her father visit Erie Cove to see a new specialist with hopes of a cure. Stumbling upon the the warm cafe with the unusually named menu items, Raven finds what she’s craving, Cayden.
Just as it looks like the new treatments are working, Raven’s father notices the spark between his daughter and the barista. Like any good parent would do, he tightens his grip on his daughter and plans to leave Erie Cove forever.
Is Cayden the answer to Raven’s plans or will he make her problems worse?
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I just finished this enchanting supernatural romance, and while it had promising elements, it left me with mixed feelings!🦋 Set in the mysterious town of Erie Cove, where a dark cloud perpetually hangs over the supernatural community, this story started with such promise.
The beginning truly captivated me - Cayden, a half-blooded winged siren reluctantly performing at his family's quirky café, the Mummy's Tomb (such a fun name!), meets Raven, a young woman battling a rare blood disease. Their initial connection felt genuine and compelling. 💫
What worked well was how Sibarium wove together supernatural elements with real human struggles. The way Raven deals with her chronic illness while discovering love for the first time felt authentic, and Cayden's protective nature and inner conflict about his siren heritage made him an interesting character. 🎵
However, the story's pacing became an issue in the last quarter. What started as a beautifully crafted romance began to feel rushed, particularly when introducing the more intimate elements. The transition felt somewhat forced, as if these scenes were added more out of obligation than organic story development.
The small-town supernatural vibes and charming touches (like the uniquely named menu items) showed potential, but the hasty conclusion left me wanting more development.
What you'll find:
- 🦋 Small town supernatural romance with promise
- 🎵 An interesting winged siren hero
- 💝 Never-been-kissed heroine
- ✨ Representation of chronic illness
- ⚡ Strong start but rushed ending
This enchanting novella earns four stars for its unique supernatural world and heartfelt romance. Though the story captivates with its magical elements and tender moments, a slightly hurried conclusion leaves room for what could have been an even richer tale.