Rookie Move

Low angst, and fun brothers best friends football romance

Knocked a star down because of too many cocky moments. It’s ok to be confident but too many times we got “ya I’m the best, I’m sooooo hot” etc etc. like yes it’s fun and fine but it got old quick. Also, a few cringe “shot my load” and weird cringey terms like that. Ok in moderation but again overuse in my opinion

I liked the fun flirty vibes they had, but I didn’t think there was enough serious to balance them out.

The teammate aspect was fun, and there was a lot of good secondary characters building up for future books.