Red Lily

I know that after the first two books showing different connections to Amelia for each character there wasn't a lot left for Hayley, but if you're going to write about someone being possessed by a ghost, you're going to have to convince me Hayley feels genuinely violated. Or, make Hayley have past experience as a medium to explain why she takes it so well. Anyone else would have probably lost their mind, started questioning reality. But Hayley is just spooked enough to sleep with the lights on (actually happens). I also think they could have kept the dreams/visions/ethereal attacks the first two books had, I don't think that would have been too repetitive the story. Lastly, Harper. He kisses women he has history with, because they're good friends, and she's supposed to accept that? Idk if that's some southern bs or what, but I don't think I've ever heard of that as a custom that anyone should be accepting from their partner. And his dynamic with Hayley is a little bit little woman/domineering “you'll do what I say” man, and not in a kinky way, just a toxic way.