Out of Time

Reads like two separate books slapped together. The first half is the same love story you've read a million times before, then once the characters get together, the book's all “Hey, look! Vampires!” And then there's a trite vampire plot where the vampire is going to kill everybody ... and then he doesn't. The end.

Found myself rushing through the conclusion just to be done with it and move on to something else. If the author had actually tried to weave the love story and the action together, this could have been a three-star book for me.

Okay, this was free, so I can't really complain, but it was obviously a self-published effort that screamed “amateur writer,” featuring cliched writing and characters, a hero who was hapless more than helpful and an icky 20 year age difference between hero and heroine. I do not feel any need to pay for the remaining books in the series.