Ratings28
Average rating3.4
After the last YA book introduced a brilliant cast, Reath Silas, Master Cohmac and Orla, Affie, Leox, and Geode, Ireland makes the questionable decision to ignore most of those characters, and turn Reath and Cohmac into side characters.
Instead, a new character is introduced, and the book focuses more on a ham-fisted romance story, that I'm certain gets more credit than it's due purely because it is an LGBTQ+ relationship. It was sweet at times, but I do not care for these two characters. They were really dull and uninteresting, and I could not believe the focus they got in this novel. A totally misguided sidestep.
Justina Ireland's writing style is quite possibly the most dull I've read since Barbara Hambly's Callista books, but it has the opposite issue. While Hambly's prose was endless and spiralling through long and complex descriptions and other nonsense, Ireland's is annoyingly simple.
This book reads nothing like a YA book. It feels targeted at young teens who read romance fanfiction. Every character seems to have an eye for one another, and the way the main girl, Syl, eyes women is almost creepy. If a man was written like this, people would be very mad, but to me, it is just as strange. Listen, we're attracted to people. We have thoughts we wouldn't openly share with everyone. But it seems to be on her mind 24/7, and I don't always need to see this on the page.