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The main story was pretty cute as a whole. Wasn't on board with how the relationship started, however, the part in the bathroom was basically harassment. That was kinda weird soured the plot in an otherwise cute story with a cute couple and cute child living a cute family life together.
As for the short story, I'm not too sure how I feel about that. Despite it being a short story, it ended up dragging out its plot as if it was gearing up for another chapter or sequel spin-off... that never happened. The characters were fine, but it ended too abruptly for that ending they were trying to do on top of how I really didn't care about either of them by the end.
The main story was pretty cute as a whole. Wasn't on board with how the relationship started, however, the part in the bathroom was basically harassment. That was kinda weird soured the plot in an otherwise cute story with a cute couple and cute child living a cute family life together.
As for the short story, I'm not too sure how I feel about that. Despite it being a short story, it ended up dragging out its plot as if it was gearing up for another chapter or sequel spin-off... that never happened. The characters were fine, but it ended too abruptly for that ending they were trying to do on top of how I really didn't care about either of them by the end.
The main story was pretty cute as a whole. Wasn't on board with how the relationship started, however, the part in the bathroom was basically harassment. That was kinda weird soured the plot in an otherwise cute story with a cute couple and cute child living a cute family life together.
As for the short story, I'm not too sure how I feel about that. Despite it being a short story, it ended up dragging out its plot as if it was gearing up for another chapter or sequel spin-off... that never happened. The characters were fine, but it ended too abruptly for that ending they were trying to do on top of how I really didn't care about either of them by the end.
The main story was pretty cute as a whole. Wasn't on board with how the relationship started, however, the part in the bathroom was basically harassment. That was kinda weird soured the plot in an otherwise cute story with a cute couple and cute child living a cute family life together.
As for the short story, I'm not too sure how I feel about that. Despite it being a short story, it ended up dragging out its plot as if it was gearing up for another chapter or sequel spin-off... that never happened. The characters were fine, but it ended too abruptly for that ending they were trying to do on top of how I really didn't care about either of them by the end.
Honestly, the main story was pretty cute as a whole. But the way the relationship started was kind of weird, the part in the bathroom was basically harassment... So that was a sour spot in otherwise a cute story with a cute couple and cute child living a cute family life together.
As for the short story, I'm not too sure how I feel about that. Despite it being a short story it tried to drag out it's plot as if it was gearing up for another chapter or sequel spin-off... that never happened. The characters were fine, but it ended too abruptly for that ending they were trying to do to make me care about either of them.
Honestly, the main story was pretty cute as a whole. But the way the relationship started was kind of weird, the part in the bathroom was basically harassment... So that was a sour spot in otherwise a cute story with a cute couple and cute child living a cute family life together.
As for the short story, I'm not too sure how I feel about that. Despite it being a short story it tried to drag out it's plot as if it was gearing up for another chapter or sequel spin-off... that never happened. The characters were fine, but it ended too abruptly for that ending they were trying to do to make me care about either of them.