Lt. Reilly 2321:

I can see something in this story. There's a solid story and some characters to make this interesting, but I just couldn't get through some of the errors. The character's name switches between Reilly and Riley in the first few chapters, for example. The tenses are inconsistent. The grammar is... spotty. Let an editor go over this book, write up a new version based on that and maybe there's something here. Unfortunately until then, it's a no from me.