Hit

Study. Eat. Sleep. Kill.

Rae is a young woman out for revenge after surviving a brutal assault that ended her swimming career aspirations. College student by day, by night she and her bestie are the crime scene cleanup crew for a mysterious serial killer. While plotting to murder one of her abusers, “The Lion”, she has encounters with three interesting men - the Gabe the Detective who was on her assault case, his son Cormac who is a fellow student, and Blake the thief who teaches her how to shoot a gun and we find also works for the serial killer.

Threads between these three men become more clear as her involvement with each develops. Rae also becomes more confident in herself, more able to deal with the trauma and panic attacks that her assault caused, helped in some part by the men she is getting involved with who are all supportive and mindful. Rae sometimes has childish tantrums with them, but this doesn't seem out of character considering her past. As Book 1 comes to an end the mystery around the serial killer remains and the ending is such a cliffhanger! Without spoiling the story I needed to know more about these romantic interests, I still have questions that I hope will be answered in the next books.

There is some spice which is explicit but fairly tame for a dark romance and the reverse harem aspect I suspect will develop further in future books too. There is some spice which is explicit but fairly tame for a dark romance and the reverse harem aspect is mild and I suspect will develop further in future books too.

I look forward to the next books in the series to find out where this story goes with both Rae and the serial killer.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

★ ★ ★ 1/2
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When I heard Dawson talk about this on The Once & Future Podcast this past Spring, I knew I had to read it. But like with about half the things I say that about when I listen to that podcast, I never got around to it. I'm so glad I finally remembered to grab it. This was a great read – a heckuva gut punch. A great immersive experience.

Sure, we've all read dystopian fictions that take place decades (at least) after the fall of whatever society preceded it. But have you ever wondered what it's like to live in the opening minutes of a dystopia? Panem before the Capital City was wretched hive of scum and vanity? Well, that's exactly what Patsy Klein is going through.

Yeah, Patsy Klein – some parents, right?

So Patsy is given a task: work as an indentured servant/debt collector for 5 days and collect from these 10 people. To collect, get their signature and record one of three choices: pay up everything you owe to the bank, now; become an indentured servant yourself for 5 days; or be killed, and here's a 17-year-old with a 9mm to take care of that. Take your pick.

How can anyone get away with that? Well, Valor Bank (and a couple of smaller entities) has bought – lock, stock and barrel – the debt of the U.S. and every individual in it. Which is a lot of debt when you stop and think about it (all that's required, really is, something like a California Rolling Stop to reach that conclusion). Valor Banks wants that debt taken care of pronto – and thanks to a subclause in that credit card application that no one ever reads, and some greased wheels in Congress, they can present these choices to pretty much every citizen. Patsy's part of the first wave of these collectors, moving out before the majority of Americans have figured out what's happening.

Killer concept, right? Utterly horrific – and yet almost utterly believable. Like I said before, when you plunge in and read this in a sitting or two it works great. If you take the time to think about some of the elements, I'm not sure it'd hold up nearly as well. But man, it was a fun read, even when it made you uneasy about what Patsy was doing.

And before I go any further, I just have to add that this is one of the best cover designs (front and back) I've seen this year. I hope someone got a promotion/bonus/raise out of this.

Again, I'm not sure how well this would hold up to examining various aspects of the world. It's clear that there's a pretty well-developed world supporting this, but the more we see of it, the more we understand the machinations that Valor Bank went through on both the macro and micro level – which it seems clear is where the sequel is going – the less I'm going to like it. A vague, nebulous Other doing horrible things is frequently better than seeing the Man Behind the Curtain. Right now, this is great – grabs the imagination, taps in to zeitgeist-y resentments towards banks/financial entities, and adds a deadly teenage girl. You explain everything, let us see what's going on and I'm afraid we'll end up with something like Allegiant (I'm convinced that was the biggest problem with the end of the trilogy, Roth explained too much).

A great read with some real weaknesses that easy enough to overlook if you want to. This'll grab you, make you feel every hit, every shot and every regret.

Well written, fast(ish) paced YA thriller, with a somewhat generic heroine and an even more typical cliffhanger ending.

I remembered really liking Servants of the Storm. Here is my review:https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/800912918Sadly, this review is going to sound like deja vu. The premise of Hit is great. The setup is kind of weird in that the rest of the world is out of the loop so the assassins can get a head start. There is waaaay too much male stepping in at the last minute to save the main character going on. I suspect most of the meh reviews are about the ending- which I agree did not make much sense and would have meant more if it happened earlier in the story. I still don't understand why all of the “hits” were connected to Patsy personally or, for that matter, why assassins would be hunting where they lived around neighbors who might recognize them anyway- there is a lot about the banks I don't understand. For example, won't the banks end up with a clientele made up of solely debt-free murderers? Whatever, I'm jaded because of books like [b:Scorch 1385237 Scorch A.D. Nauman https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1348899056s/1385237.jpg 1375274]Scorch and [b:Feed 169756 Feed M.T. Anderson https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1327891005s/169756.jpg 163928]Feed. I went along for the ride, and enjoyed the hell out of it from a hammock. There are some profound lines in the novel that reflect where we are as a culture “why does it cost more to die from cancer.....” I would have liked to see more introspection, but hey.Overall, it's a good read. The story goes there (Patsy does not flounder), it stalls out with late night make out sessions. I predict Wyatt and Patsy are half brother and sister, so... ew. but I haven't figured out how Jack Cannon fits into the story yet I also predict that the second book in the series is probably going to be the book everyone was expecting this one to be (the resistance).