Garden

a closer visual representation of my brain on paper as rendered by another artist has yet to be found

With all the repetitive dialogue it felt like I was being hit in the head with what the visuals were supposed to be rather than letting the graphics speak for themselves. Also due to the seemingly endless movement the pacing seemed rushed.

‘Travel' is fast paced, but there is an ergency and emotion behind it. In ‘Garden' it comes off as a novel visual world where the point of view never rests and the observer/reader is just rushed along to view one possibly interesting sight after another without the chance to take any one thing in. It was like sprinting through a museum.