Ratings1,688
Average rating4
Decent story. Decent slow build romance, but too much focus on the sex and thoughts about wanting sex that really just detracted from the story and severely slowed the pacing. Character building could use some work as well. World building...you're only told what's relevant to the story. No lore, no deep history, no religions. Does it serve the plot? No? Cut it to make room for the sex.
The story could easily make this a 4-5-star book for me, but pornographic literature is what is selling right now. It's just not for me.