Forsaken Relic
Ratings3
Average rating3.5
The idea of the story is good but it feels overall a bit choppy to me, and it has just increased as I progress through the series. People are growling and snarling out of nowhere in a normal conversation, sprinting right up to other characters and doing the most basic conversational things, the feelings people are developing throughout the series kinda happen all the sudden, I don’t know. I feel like we are missing out on some description text and some adjectives and inner monologue or something.
Don’t get me wrong, I like it and will be continuing to see what happens but can feel a bit jarring at times
The idea of the story is good but it feels overall a bit choppy to me, and it has just increased as I progress through the series. People are growling and snarling out of nowhere in a normal conversation, sprinting right up to other characters and doing the most basic conversational things, the feelings people are developing throughout the series kinda happen all the sudden, I don’t know. I feel like we are missing out on some description text and some adjectives and inner monologue or something.
Don’t get me wrong, I like it and will be continuing to see what happens but can feel a bit jarring at times
