Ethan's Mate

Nice short read that is similar to two other series by two authors. The ‘doom' in the story... The suspense was too short and the event appeared too quickly and was over too quickly. It seemed more like it was thrown in as an afterthought. Other than that, I liked the story.

This was FREE on AMAZON today, so I figured “What the hell I'll give it go...“



Ethan is a 400 year old vampire and pretty much given up on ever finding his mate. Him and his three brothers belong to the Vampire Coalition whose job is to protect humans from fallen vampires. Brianna Cole is dieing from a rare blood condition and fading fast. In her dreams she calls out to Ethan for help. Can Ethan find his destined mate before it is too late....?



I enjoyed this one. It is pretty much INSTA-EVERYTHING and could have used A LOT more fleshing out of the characters and the World building. Brianna just accepts everything lickady-split. I was scratching my head over the fact that Brianna was at death's door, super skinny, short hair because the chemotherapy made it fall out. Drinking Ethan's blood makes her fat and sassy again, with long luscious hair. So this wouldn't have been an issue except they go visit her mom (keeping the fact vampires exist a secret from her) and she doesn't wonder or ask why all of a sudden her dying daughter looks like a fashion model?? Anyways, why ask why right?

Like I said I enjoyed it for what it was. It was extremely short and I think this author would have been better served writing a longer story and fleshing it out more. The bones for a really AWESOME full length book were right there for the taking...