Daphne

Would have been more likely to give this a 3 if the ending hadn't dropped off so abruptly. The story needed at least 2 or 3 more chapters to better tie everything together.

Overall, the idea for the plot was interesting enough. The characters and setting had a surface level appeal, but I felt detached from the characters. The dialogue was lacking, making it hard to get fully absorbed in the story.

Ridiculous, appalling, disgusting, distasteful. Awful prose, dialogue of illiterate juvenile level, characters that are less interesting than an unpainted wall. This filth has nothing to do with the Greek myth of Daphne and Apollo. This is a low-quality toilet paper.

P.S. Writers, please. Leave the Greek myths alone. They're out of your minuscule caliber.

P.P.S Male writers, if you don't know how to write an interesting heroine, focus on a cowboy or an alien. You'll do better. Possibly...