City of Broken Magic

Clae Sinclair is the Head Sweeper of Amicae. Clae and his apprentice Laura take care of any infestations in their city. Amulets hold various magic. They can be used for everyday household things like cooking, or in jobs for speed, pretty much everything. But when an amulet gets broken, it becomes the possible host to an infestation. An infestation will destroy everything around it until it's stopped. That's where the sweepers come in. They make sure broken amulets are taken care of properly, and they fight any infestations that arise.

Somebody has it out for Clae. Would they really unleash multiple infestations on the city just to get back at one man? It looks that way.

This story was good, but not great. I thought the magic system sounded interesting, and I liked the characters. I doubt I will continue the series though. It just wasn't that memorable.

I received a copy from Net Galley. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

Pros: unique magic and monster system, interesting characters

Cons: pacing issues, slow opening

The city of Amicae is built as a 6 tiered structure with an outer wall. It citizens believe the wall keeps magical infestations at bay but that's a lie. Infestations from broken or improperly cared for amulets happen all the time, and when they do the cops call in the experts: the Sinclair Sweepers.

Laura is Clae Sinclair's only apprentice in the dangerous work. She wants to prove she has worth as a person in a society that sees her as more of a walking womb. When they acquire a second apprentice and infestations start to increase, she gets her chance.

It took me a while to get into this. First because the world started out feeling very medieval fantasy despite its bicycles and robots. The worldbuilding was alternately slow and full of info dumps in the opening chapters.

Clae is acerbic and rude and while I liked him, he takes some getting used to. For the most part I liked Larua, though I was surprised by her age when it was finally revealed, as I ended up picturing her younger given how she treats Okane.

As a master teaching a trade, Clae's a mixed bag. On one hand he does teach weapons and technique, but I was astonished by how little Laura knew about kin and its creation. As the main weapon against infestations, I would have thought learning how to make kin would be vital to a sweeper's job.

I loved the monsters and how the sweepers fight them. It's very original. I also liked that another city is visited and there's some information on how the various cities operate and that sweepers use different tactics and that they share ideas through meetings and letters.

The last half of the book was quite fun and the pacing was much better as the tension worked up to the climax.

While it's a bit uneven, it's a good debut and I'm curious to see what's next.

I think a lot of times I'll read so much modern world fantasy or low fantasy that I'll forget how fun a full fantasy with a heavy emphasis on the world-building and the magic system is. I know this happened with The Unspoken Name and definitely was the case with this book. I'll admit (quite easily) that magic systems can and do confuse me and that was present here. I didn't understand much of it so I hope that'll be different when I return to it. Or I just enjoy the book and not understand everything! I'm good with that too.

I thought the characters were interesting but the emphasis in this book clearly was on the world-building and the plots. Not that the characters didn't develop, but I could tell it will be gradual development. I think with series; characters can be introduced and developed over the series but most of the world-building and magic systems should be introduced and explained in the first book. And that's what Bolender did here!

I liked Clae. He had a fun, dry sense of humour and he kept a lot of his personality closed off, though you were still able to get a feel for his personality. I liked Okane too. He has an incredibly difficult backstory and trauma that they haven't explored enough. I also think he has more power than he realises and I'd like to see that improve.

I liked Laura as a narrator, though I probably would've preferred Clae as that spot but that's because I liked him more. I hope in the next book she's able to fully come into her personality and then I'll like her some more. I hope that Laura and Okane don't get into a relationship over the series. I just really don't see them as a romantic couple. Friends, absolutely. Confidants. Even Laura essentially being a pseudo-mentor to him. We'll see what the author does.