Broken In

With a title like Mind Break, I expected this book to be about actually breaking someone down into a willing submissive. It most certainly is not.

Yes, I expected kink and maybe some unsafe/inaccurate portrayals of BDSM themes... but this goes beyond that into the realm of completely ridiculous nonsense. It tries to evade the fact the woman is being drugged and coerced by claiming this all-powerful drug only makes her super aroused and she still has to consent to be ‘broken.' Yeah, no. It's an insult to the readers' intelligence and a disservice to what could have been an interesting concept.

If I could give this zero stars, I would. It's just an extremely short and mediocre sex scene in which a victim begs to be violated and her partner who's forced to watch gets off on it and decides to join the assailant in starting a harem... all in the span of a few pages. I've seen free videos with more believable plots than this ‘book,' and that's saying a lot.