Bonfire

Nothing much to say about this one unfortunately. It's enjoyable enough, but not much more than that. There's a mystery that needs solving, and I had trouble caring about it enough to keep it suspenseful for me. So I took way longer about finishing this than I otherwise would. Still wanted to finish it so it definitely wasn't bad! Just not “keeps you on your toes” good.

*3.5 probably. This is a fun and thrilling book with enough solid writing and twists to keep me turning pages regularly. A few things left me wanting, but I definitely recommend to anyone looking for a fast-paced, menacing read.

3.75 stars Not bad for a first novel.

Nothing terribly original or mind blowing, but a solid, entertaining book nonetheless. Really liked the first half of the book. Kinda went downhill from that point on. Totally saw coming that Kaycee was dead and who had killed her.

I won this book via Goodreads giveaway.

Well, it took me almost two weeks to get through a book marketed as a fast-paced thriller. That's a little disappointing - this one isn't long by any stretch. I think the issue is that it just wasn't that compelling. The description sounded fun: girl leaves small-town hometown, becomes an environmental lawyer and then gets suckered into investigating a case involving her hometown and a company that employs half the town. The problem is that water pollution - and going through hundreds of binders of financial records - does not a compelling thriller make.

In reality, Abby doesn't do much in the way of showing up for work, and spends most of the book reliving and obsessing over every terrible thing that happened in her teen years, and decides it's her job to uncover a humongo conspiracy that only she believes is actually happening.

I wasn't even convinced that her conspiracy theory was likely (even though it's set up from the beginning that you're supposed to trust her because unlike everyone else on the case, this her hometown and she knows this small town and no one else could possibly ever understand). Abby is a crazy-unreliable narrator, constantly jumping to conclusions - mostly incorrect - and has a very selective memory and selective strokes of brilliance, all muddied by constant can't-remember-what-happened-last-night drunkenness. I saw what was coming from a mile away, and it just wasn't much fun.

(Plus, a personal irk - the book is supposed to have taken place ten years after she left her hometown, and yet she's constantly describing her former classmates as having grown paunchy, with receding hairlines and beer guts, or alternatively, still looking pretty darn good. EXCEPT THAT YOU'RE TWENTY-EIGHT AND SO ARE ALL YOUR CLASSMATES, UGH YOU CAN'T HAVE IT BOTH WAYS.)

BUT! I did think the writing was pretty good overall, and you can tell Ritter's got the makings of a great writer if she continues down this path. Whatever she writes next, I'll probably check it out.

Bonfire A Novel by Krysten Ritter published by Crown Publishing is a very fast read and not what you would expect from someone who started out as an actor and producer. I love watching her on Jessica Jones and I think part of the appeal of picking this bookwas knowing the person who wrote it and being such a big fan. I was pleasantly surprised at how well this fucking together and how much I actually enjoyed the story. The story Surrounds Abby Williams a woman who is asked to investigate local complaints of a water plant of her home town ten years after her high school graduation. The story should center around the current case that has brought her back home, but what we are given as readers is a gift of the past and how it all ties into the case. While I feel that most lawyers should feel disjointed from the cases they work I find Abby's bleak future and rocky past endearing as it shows two things, first being the development of the character that is Abby and the emotional trauma that she goes through to push this story through to the end. Abby is unsettled by her past and the disappearance of her friend-enemy Kacyee who supposedly left town after faking an illness due to the water supply.

I don't want to give two much away I think as a reader it is important for people to unwrap a good book one page at a time. I will say that social climbing and bullying play a big role in small towns where you want to give yourself the best possible outcome in life., Who gains the most from this lawsuit who stands to lose the most and how does Abby put her life back together before losing her sanity. 4 solid stars for a book you can devour in one sitting.

Arc provided for my honest review through Negalley

This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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When you grow up in a place called Barrens, you want to get out – especially if it's an area with limited job options, a struggling agricultural industry, and nothing else to commend it. Although, the name alone would probably justify wanting to get out even if the economy and culture were richer. But as is the case with too many small towns like this, few manage to get out. Abby Williams headed for Chicago two days after she graduated from high school, went to college and law school, becoming an associate at an environmental firm – and only sometime after that did she return.

She returns with her friend (a gay black man, who tends to stick out in the small, rural Illinois town), a first-year associate and a couple of students to investigate some claims about the water in the local reservoir. The town's only major employer is called Optimal Plastics, which has been dogged by rumors of shoddy environmental practices and health problems for years – including before they came to Illinois – and the team is going to see if they can make these rumors and concerns stick this time.

As they dig into records, tests, regulatory reports and whatnot, Abby notices something. Optimal Plastics is clean. Absolutely clean – on paper, there's never been a company so clean and responsible. Which just seems impossible, no one is this perfect. Abby smells blood in the water and goes on the attack.

At the same time, in a small town, you can't help but run into people you don't want to see again – which is pretty much everyone from High School. The girls who used to torment her, the guy she had a large crush on, the people she wasn't so sure about. It takes mere moments for her to get embroiled (or re-embroiled) in the same relationships, problems, gossip that she'd escaped from. From “the old crowd” (that was never Abby's crowd), she gets her insight into Optimal Plastics – all the good they've done for the town, the numbers of people they employ, the money they pour into the schools, and so on. So much good that no one wants to take a good look into them, the price is potentially too high.

This reminds her (not that she needed the reminder) of some problems potentially tied to the company back when she was in high school – girls that seemed inexplicably sick. What else could it be from? She's told time and time again by her friend that what happened over a decade ago doesn't matter,what matters is what the company is doing now. Abby's not convinced, and keeps digging at this – even if she agrees with him, the ghosts that haunt her will not allow her to let it go. Abby becomes more and more focused on this aspect of the investigation – flirting with and maybe crossing the lines into obsession.

Oh, and did I mention her father? As you may have picked up from the fact I mentioned earlier that she hadn't returned to Barrens since high school that she's not that close to anyone there – including her father. The exploration of and changes to their relationship is one of the more emotionally satisfying storylines in the book.

I'm from a small town, I get the feeling of never actually escaping from it – returning to the same place you left. But I'm willing to bet that even readers from larger towns/cities can relate to this. You can take the girl out of High School, but you can never take High School out of the girl, I guess. Ritter deals with the emotional realities and hazards like a pro – there's not a beat that seems false or forced. The manner in which Abby makes connections, interweaves her look into what happened years ago with what's going on right now is great (for the reader). The secrets she uncovers are chilling and unthinkable – yet entirely believable.

Would I have liked to have seen more with her colleagues reacting to Barrens, helping her follow the leads she's interested in, or just interacting with her at all? Absolutely – but I'm not sure how Ritter could've done that without more effort than it's probably worth. Could she have done more with her Chicago-friend sticking out in Barrens? Yup, but it might have distracted from the overall plot (but if she's going to remark on it as often as she does, she should do something on it – it comes across as urban snobbery). I think that's almost something I could say about everything in the book. I don't know that I needed a lot more of everything, but I think every bit of the story, the characters, the mystery, etc. could use a little bit more development, a little more space. Not much, just a little bit.

I liked Abby almost immediately – from the fairly disturbing Prologue, on through to her struggles in town and questionable choices, you root for her and hope that she finds an element of peace. Her coworkers are great. It's hard to decide what you think about some of her old high school friends right away, and probably best no to decide too much about anyone in town until The Reveal at the end.

The writing is crisp and compelling – Ritter has some really nice turns of phrase as well. There's a couple of times that Abby is drunk and/or the influence of alcohol plus other things that were just excellent. Abby's inability to keep her perceptions in line, to have a coherent recollection about everything she experiences through this time – that's just excellently executed.

I won't say that it's one of the best books I've read this year – if there's a plot point here that you haven't seen, I'll be surprised. If there's a character, character arc, or anything like that you haven't seen before, I'll eat my hat. Does it matter? Nope. The way that Ritter tells the story, how she treats the characters and shows them to the reader – how she executes things, that's the key. It all worked really well, I was thoroughly entertained, even held in suspense. Even if in retrospect I decided that I'd seen it all before, I didn't see a lot of it coming – or I'd seen story elements X and Y a few dozen times, I hadn't seen them combined the way Ritter did. This is a solid first novel, and I hope there's at least a second on the way.

Disclaimer: I received this eARC from Crown Publishing via NetGalley in exchange for this post – thanks to both for this.