Black Rainbow

There’s a good story in here. Unfortunately it was marred by an unbelievable number of basic spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors. It’s such a shame, because story and character-wise, it’s a really good example of the genre. I just wish the author had bothered to get a proofreader (or knew how to do it themselves). If it had been exactly as is but without any of the mistakes, it would have been 3.5 stars.

Plodding pace