Again, but Better

Did no one proofread this? I caught at least four major typos throughout the book. The whole thing read like really bad fan fiction, it had the same effect as binge-reading someone's Tumblr. The bland love interest was named Pilot Penn, whom the main character inexplicably nicknames “Pies”. Her “quirky”best friend is named Babe Lozenge. Babe....Lozenge. She should've just called her Lola Riccola and been done with it. I was half expecting the plot twist to be that the narrator was really in a mental institution the entire time and had fabricated the entire plot, using inanimate objects as her “friends”.

I have more thoughts but this book has already wasted my time so I won't give it any more.