Rosanne

It can be hard to write a negative review about a sensitive book, but I don’t mince my words when it comes to reviews. I frowned so much while reading this book. I expected all the mysterious issues to be cleared up by the end of the book, but no. I should have looked closer and saved myself the trouble, because this is part 1 of a series that I won’t be continuing.

Everyone in the book gets a nickname, so it takes a long time to figure out who they’re talking about. Garrett is Greedy, Levi is Duke, and Hunter gets a different name from everyone. The worst were Arti and Temi, short for Artemis. Because her name is Hunter, you know? Sigh..

Hunter apparently has anxiety, but it’s so poorly addressed that the only thing I know about it is that she sometimes stays in bed for a few days. And during those nights, she apparently has to lie on top of someone. Or between two people. Ironic that Greedy isn’t the most greedy character.

I think my biggest issue was, is that no one communicates in a healthy way! There is no chemistry between the characters, but Hunter is apparently a magnet for men. I felt sorry for Greedy, they should have shared the big secret with him. He is next level obsessed with Hunter, who treats him terribly. Let her go, boy. Especially when in the last pages another dude suddenly shows up at the door. Sorry, Sir Kabir Kareem Alexander Louis Cornelia Spencer 😂 Hunter apparently picked him up with her mysterious attraction during her mysterious tour through ✨Europe✨.

This story is held together by tie-rips and duct tape, and I will not be reading part 2

Cliché after cliché.. she's a petite girl in a man's world, who, of course, knows everything about cars, and who, of course, wears a tutu while working on cars. But with combat boots on, of course, otherwise she wouldn't be ✨different✨ from the other girls. Nope, not even going to spend an hour in this one.

In the first few pages of this book I already found three reasons not to waste my time reading it:

1) OMG YES "Omega Chi Kappa!" I'm zero percent interested in reading about some sorority girl who shakes her ass on a parade floatie.

2) The quote "Because even at twelve, strutting down a pageant stage in a bikini, I knew what my power was." Excuse you? Twelve??

3) She tosses her dirty wet wipes on the sidewalk. I'm done. I couldn't care less what her story is going to be.