Rosanne
It can be hard to write a negative review about a sensitive book, but I don’t mince my words when it comes to reviews. I frowned so much while reading this book. I expected all the mysterious issues to be cleared up by the end of the book, but no. I should have looked closer and saved myself the trouble, because this is part 1 of a series that I won’t be continuing.
Everyone in the book gets a nickname, so it takes a long time to figure out who they’re talking about. Garrett is Greedy, Levi is Duke, and Hunter gets a different name from everyone. The worst were Arti and Temi, short for Artemis. Because her name is Hunter, you know? Sigh..
Hunter apparently has anxiety, but it’s so poorly addressed that the only thing I know about it is that she sometimes stays in bed for a few days. And during those nights, she apparently has to lie on top of someone. Or between two people. Ironic that Greedy isn’t the most greedy character.
I think my biggest issue was, is that no one communicates in a healthy way! There is no chemistry between the characters, but Hunter is apparently a magnet for men. I felt sorry for Greedy, they should have shared the big secret with him. He is next level obsessed with Hunter, who treats him terribly. Let her go, boy. Especially when in the last pages another dude suddenly shows up at the door. Sorry, Sir Kabir Kareem Alexander Louis Cornelia Spencer 😂 Hunter apparently picked him up with her mysterious attraction during her mysterious tour through ✨Europe✨.
This story is held together by tie-rips and duct tape, and I will not be reading part 2
It can be hard to write a negative review about a sensitive book, but I don’t mince my words when it comes to reviews. I frowned so much while reading this book. I expected all the mysterious issues to be cleared up by the end of the book, but no. I should have looked closer and saved myself the trouble, because this is part 1 of a series that I won’t be continuing.
Everyone in the book gets a nickname, so it takes a long time to figure out who they’re talking about. Garrett is Greedy, Levi is Duke, and Hunter gets a different name from everyone. The worst were Arti and Temi, short for Artemis. Because her name is Hunter, you know? Sigh..
Hunter apparently has anxiety, but it’s so poorly addressed that the only thing I know about it is that she sometimes stays in bed for a few days. And during those nights, she apparently has to lie on top of someone. Or between two people. Ironic that Greedy isn’t the most greedy character.
I think my biggest issue was, is that no one communicates in a healthy way! There is no chemistry between the characters, but Hunter is apparently a magnet for men. I felt sorry for Greedy, they should have shared the big secret with him. He is next level obsessed with Hunter, who treats him terribly. Let her go, boy. Especially when in the last pages another dude suddenly shows up at the door. Sorry, Sir Kabir Kareem Alexander Louis Cornelia Spencer 😂 Hunter apparently picked him up with her mysterious attraction during her mysterious tour through ✨Europe✨.
This story is held together by tie-rips and duct tape, and I will not be reading part 2