rating - 4/5
“I hate the lackadaisical ennui of a sun too preoccupied with itself to notice the infinite hours we spend in its presence.”
did i think the prose was really good? yes. did i also think it was a tad bit excessive? yes.
“I spent my life folded between the pages of books.In the absence of human relationships I formed bonds with paper characters. I lived love and loss through stories threaded in history; I experienced adolescence by association. My world is one interwoven web of words, stringing limb to limb, bone to sinew, thoughts and images all together. I am a being comprised of letters, a character created by sentences, a figment of imagination formed through fiction.”
underwhelming
there is a problem, if ALL you're using is metaphors.
“and please and please and please—”“He looks so familiar so familiar so familiar to me.“There are 400 cotton balls caught in my windpipe.”“My jaw is dangling from my shoelace.”
really liked the world-building and evolution of the different relationships
slow
development
quite fast paced in the sense of reading time
here for Juliette's character arc
rating - 4/5
“I hate the lackadaisical ennui of a sun too preoccupied with itself to notice the infinite hours we spend in its presence.”
did i think the prose was really good? yes. did i also think it was a tad bit excessive? yes.
“I spent my life folded between the pages of books.In the absence of human relationships I formed bonds with paper characters. I lived love and loss through stories threaded in history; I experienced adolescence by association. My world is one interwoven web of words, stringing limb to limb, bone to sinew, thoughts and images all together. I am a being comprised of letters, a character created by sentences, a figment of imagination formed through fiction.”
underwhelming
there is a problem, if ALL you're using is metaphors.
“and please and please and please—”“He looks so familiar so familiar so familiar to me.“There are 400 cotton balls caught in my windpipe.”“My jaw is dangling from my shoelace.”
really liked the world-building and evolution of the different relationships
slow
development
quite fast paced in the sense of reading time
here for Juliette's character arc