riley
Playing Offside
I was left a little disappointed in this.
While it had potential, these two were never enemies. Rivals sure, but they never hated each other.
The spicy scenes were lacking, which is okay but it left something to be desired. Clean/closed door scenes are fine but they were explicit - just unfortunately dull.
There was some timeline jumps that weren’t clear, months or weeks passed and you didn’t realize until one of them said oh ya it’s been 10 months since we started.
I was left a little disappointed in this.
While it had potential, these two were never enemies. Rivals sure, but they never hated each other.
The spicy scenes were lacking, which is okay but it left something to be desired. Clean/closed door scenes are fine but they were explicit - just unfortunately dull.
There was some timeline jumps that weren’t clear, months or weeks passed and you didn’t realize until one of them said oh ya it’s been 10 months since we started.