riley
It was fun, but not great.
I thought the side characters Kit and Bane were weird AF? I imagine we will get their stories later but super strange.
It was sweet to see Dean’s POV toward his son Ben, and have this be along the same timeline has his book.
Some of the language felt odd. (As a straight woman I feel unsure about commenting) maybe for some it’s ok and makes sense, but Dean and Avery both identify as men. During spicy time, dean’s dirty talk mentions Avery’s tits and pussy. Heat of the moment? Maybe. Avery is more feminine and dresses in women’s clothing, but it felt odd to use that language toward him. (Not a complaint per say but just something I questioned - Avery was 100% fine with it in the book but you get my point)
It was fun, but not great.
I thought the side characters Kit and Bane were weird AF? I imagine we will get their stories later but super strange.
It was sweet to see Dean’s POV toward his son Ben, and have this be along the same timeline has his book.
Some of the language felt odd. (As a straight woman I feel unsure about commenting) maybe for some it’s ok and makes sense, but Dean and Avery both identify as men. During spicy time, dean’s dirty talk mentions Avery’s tits and pussy. Heat of the moment? Maybe. Avery is more feminine and dresses in women’s clothing, but it felt odd to use that language toward him. (Not a complaint per say but just something I questioned - Avery was 100% fine with it in the book but you get my point)