riley
While enjoyable, it was missing something.
A lot of thing happened off page that we wanted to see, and then things DIDNT happen that should have.
Christmas at the daltons - it was a newsletter chapter but it should have been part of the book. And the chapter itself was bland. We needed WAY more in that. And we didn’t even get to see Harrison’s family Christmas.
The twin switch thing barely had a consequence. The daltons weren’t told about it and nothing happened with Emmett? Maybe when we get to his book we will see more?
The epilogue proposal seemed 9 years too late considering the insta love going on.
That being said!!!!!! It was cute and fluffy and what this whole kind of universe is so not mad about it just meh
While enjoyable, it was missing something.
A lot of thing happened off page that we wanted to see, and then things DIDNT happen that should have.
Christmas at the daltons - it was a newsletter chapter but it should have been part of the book. And the chapter itself was bland. We needed WAY more in that. And we didn’t even get to see Harrison’s family Christmas.
The twin switch thing barely had a consequence. The daltons weren’t told about it and nothing happened with Emmett? Maybe when we get to his book we will see more?
The epilogue proposal seemed 9 years too late considering the insta love going on.
That being said!!!!!! It was cute and fluffy and what this whole kind of universe is so not mad about it just meh