I tried, but it is very clear this older author was writing a 30-something character with no grasp for how we talk. No 30-something calls herself a gal. No one says they're going to eat “this hella cake” (that'd not even correct usage of the word). It just seems so contrived.

This was a cute read that perfectly describes dating in this modern world, especially if you're older and not just looking for a fling. I knew pretty early how it was going to turn out, but that's okay. I enjoyed the journey.