I borrowed this book because I liked what it promised: ghosts & witch magic, small-town island gothic, a spooky house, & found family. Add to that a light romance and the suggestion from the cover blurb of laugh-out-loud humor, and I was looking forward to a fun read.
It had much potential, but didn't quite get there. Character development and relationships felt forced and rushed, and it made it difficult to connect with them. The Edison POV seemed...unnecessary, not really adding to the story. I expected the focus to be on Riley and her relationship with her new friends-slash-coven-slash-sisterhood, but it seemed like there were too many (fun) ideas fighting for page time.
The humor and the writing style were just not my cup of tea (in particular, scenes of descriptive vomiting). There was much explaining of things, and recapping of events. Time passage was often jumpy and confusing.
The shining point in the book was Plover. His dialogue alone told me everything I needed to know about him. He was the most rounded character, the most sensible, and my favorite. There were other nice touches, like Natalie, small-town quirks, and haunted antiques. But this book just didn't get it done for me.
I borrowed this book because I liked what it promised: ghosts & witch magic, small-town island gothic, a spooky house, & found family. Add to that a light romance and the suggestion from the cover blurb of laugh-out-loud humor, and I was looking forward to a fun read.
It had much potential, but didn't quite get there. Character development and relationships felt forced and rushed, and it made it difficult to connect with them. The Edison POV seemed...unnecessary, not really adding to the story. I expected the focus to be on Riley and her relationship with her new friends-slash-coven-slash-sisterhood, but it seemed like there were too many (fun) ideas fighting for page time.
The humor and the writing style were just not my cup of tea (in particular, scenes of descriptive vomiting). There was much explaining of things, and recapping of events. Time passage was often jumpy and confusing.
The shining point in the book was Plover. His dialogue alone told me everything I needed to know about him. He was the most rounded character, the most sensible, and my favorite. There were other nice touches, like Natalie, small-town quirks, and haunted antiques. But this book just didn't get it done for me.