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i think this book would be better if more research is done and longer stories for more in-depth understanding of the events and characters instead of just brushing it off and continuing it just like that. there's too much pieces that doesn't make sense like hasan-james meeting (like what most mentioned in the reviews) or tobias-chira relationship and the japan bit seems really random. in terms of writing style, it still shines because it's primadonna angela but the changing of thought from one character to another can be a little confusing when reading. especially the going back and forth of the story.

overall i think the bg story is interesting with the kutu loncat theme but would be great to include more of that aspect and give a clearer and deeper story for each part so it doesn't feel rushed.