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3/5
That book was mostly boring. I didn't care about either character except for Hazel, she was precious.
The jokes weren't funny to me at all, the story was meh although certainly not the worst. The ending just pissed me off. So he didn't tell her he pulled out as her manager, she found out from other people, ignored him and it was all done at 96%?? And the next chapter takes place a month later and they're suddenly okay? I hated that. Show, not tell. I hate when authors tell and not show.
Also the epilogue was so bad. Why almost every author thinks that being married and being a mother is a woman's happy ending - especially that nothing in the book indicated it? Sure, Fee loved Hazel and she was already a mother figure. And she loved Meyers. But nowhere in the book was it said that she wants to be his wife or give birth to his child. That was his fantasy, not hers, one he didn't even tell her. Seriously the whole epilogue is out of character, out of place, and completely unnecessary.
3/5
That book was mostly boring. I didn't care about either character except for Hazel, she was precious.
The jokes weren't funny to me at all, the story was meh although certainly not the worst. The ending just pissed me off. So he didn't tell her he pulled out as her manager, she found out from other people, ignored him and it was all done at 96%?? And the next chapter takes place a month later and they're suddenly okay? I hated that. Show, not tell. I hate when authors tell and not show.
Also the epilogue was so bad. Why almost every author thinks that being married and being a mother is a woman's happy ending - especially that nothing in the book indicated it? Sure, Fee loved Hazel and she was already a mother figure. And she loved Meyers. But nowhere in the book was it said that she wants to be his wife or give birth to his child. That was his fantasy, not hers, one he didn't even tell her. Seriously the whole epilogue is out of character, out of place, and completely unnecessary.