Dave

* Very confusing at first, multiple points of view with same name

* Extremely hard to get into, took me ages to read

* Interesting points about memory?

"* Love is very sudden and intense, it's a bit much. Feels overall a bit YA

* Setting is alright, Viet space magic!

* Trauma responses are real, and interactions feel true, tho a bit overdone

* Feels a bit generic"

"* Too much weird poetry

* Nice take on uppity social norms as ""orders"" to inferiors

* Setting is imaginative but too simple"

"* Doesn't fit with the series, or Chih's personality

* Very twist ending"

* Weird biology, horror elements

* Too much ""what if fascism?"

* Too much hiding things from the reader

* Very slow going, ending a bit obvious

* The allegory about trying to find work amidst suffering is a bit obvious but a bit clever.

* Lots of random cultural references. Not comedy per se, but not far off.

* Ending felt a bit obvious.