I wanted to love this. I think taking taking the story of individuals impacted by a war-torn country and placing it in a “Western Country” is a brilliant way to break the complacency that can come with reading similar, real stories in the news. Of course, the rise of authoritarian governments also makes this a little too timely. However, the strange formatting added nothing for me and detracted from the book. At first it did add to the frenetic pace, but it did make it feel jumbled in the middle and like I missed some important details and prose. It worked well to sit up the beginning slow creep and the frenetic pace of the ending, but was also an impediment.
Loved the world this created - The characters, the lore, the world building (taking fantasy away from a vaguely European setting and placing it in pre-Columbia Americas). However, it definitely felt like an introduction to a series. It felt sort of plodding and that it was just prepping the reader for what was to come in the next book. I will certainly read that one too due to the brilliance of the world that was created here.
The best way I can think to describe this is a very impressively written book that was (for my taste) poorly written. The fact that he made up his own science system and could justify it was very cool, but then the book was him or (SPOILERS) his alien friend (and I did love Rocky) either explaining the science or making sarcastic comment. Grace was both a walking textbook and had the vocabulary of a wise cracking teenager. The prose was incredibly underwhelming. And while the science system was impressive, it was like reading a murder mystery without the author ever giving you clues as to how to actually solve it (unless you are also a super scientist). “Ope Ryland and Rocky are in another conundrum, guess I'll read four pages of a scientific explanation to see how they get out of it.” Again, incredibly impressive book and I am excited for the movie because I think the idea was very cool, but the execution as a novel was incredibly underwhelming at best for me.
The first book was a brilliant, complex and easy to follow all at the same time. This one was brilliant, complex, and introduced so many new concepts that it was difficult to follow at times. I was still enraptured, but the “science” or “facts” of the world didn't seem as well explained which was the focus of the book, which made it fairly frustrating at times.