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This book follows Lin Chong, a once-arms instructor for the Emperor, who gets branded a criminal based solely on the untrue word of a government official. She falls in with a group of bandits who have a code of justice to protect those less fortunate, and though they do many good deeds, they're all still criminals, traitors, and cutthroats, so Lin Chong struggles daily with reconciling her old life with her new one. This book also (in the middle stretch, at least) follows Lin Chong's friend li Junyi, who gets voluntold by the Empire to work on harnessing a weapon--manufactured Gods' Teeth. Chapters are dedicated to her viewpoint as she works through creating a small team to meet the demands, researching and testing the weapon, and finding out her best friend is working for the other side.
I very badly wanted to like this book, especially since it starts out really strong in my opinion, but the middle chunk of the book felt too oddly paced, and focused too much on Ii Junyi. The ending was strong, but I mentally struggled to keep my attention in the middle stretch of the book. I also feel like the cast of characters was entirely too large, and while Lu Da's character was necessary to be Lin Chong's other half (so to speak), I personally didn't really care for her personality.
The writing was really strong though, I just had a hard time with the actual story being told.
This book follows Lin Chong, a once-arms instructor for the Emperor, who gets branded a criminal based solely on the untrue word of a government official. She falls in with a group of bandits who have a code of justice to protect those less fortunate, and though they do many good deeds, they're all still criminals, traitors, and cutthroats, so Lin Chong struggles daily with reconciling her old life with her new one. This book also (in the middle stretch, at least) follows Lin Chong's friend li Junyi, who gets voluntold by the Empire to work on harnessing a weapon--manufactured Gods' Teeth. Chapters are dedicated to her viewpoint as she works through creating a small team to meet the demands, researching and testing the weapon, and finding out her best friend is working for the other side.
I very badly wanted to like this book, especially since it starts out really strong in my opinion, but the middle chunk of the book felt too oddly paced, and focused too much on Ii Junyi. The ending was strong, but I mentally struggled to keep my attention in the middle stretch of the book. I also feel like the cast of characters was entirely too large, and while Lu Da's character was necessary to be Lin Chong's other half (so to speak), I personally didn't really care for her personality.
The writing was really strong though, I just had a hard time with the actual story being told.