Chris M
Overall, the book has a great base story. I like when authors focus on children in the foster system and the struggles they go through to find a forever family. Especially, kids that are a little older. However, this book seemed to be a little on the rushed side. I feel that the author made compromises by leaving out details in order to keep the story shorter.
This book would benefit from a longer length with more details of what is happening at camp. Expand on the activities that characters participate in and how they interact with each other. Also, the characters could use a little more background to help the reader understand more about them and why they think and act the way they do, especially Keller.
Overall, the book has a great base story. I like when authors focus on children in the foster system and the struggles they go through to find a forever family. Especially, kids that are a little older. However, this book seemed to be a little on the rushed side. I feel that the author made compromises by leaving out details in order to keep the story shorter.
This book would benefit from a longer length with more details of what is happening at camp. Expand on the activities that characters participate in and how they interact with each other. Also, the characters could use a little more background to help the reader understand more about them and why they think and act the way they do, especially Keller.
