Pallas Poppies
856 Reads
It’s a debut and it reads like one, you can tell that this is a first for the author and I will cut them some slack.
How many little old ladies where there... four, two in each room would make sense but I don’t remember them much. Maybe fewer so that they would each get more attention?
Less telling and more showing. ’ll read the next book from this author.
It’s a debut and it reads like one, you can tell that this is a first for the author and I will cut them some slack.
How many little old ladies where there... four, two in each room would make sense but I don’t remember them much. Maybe fewer so that they would each get more attention?
Less telling and more showing. ’ll read the next book from this author.