Pallas Poppies
First in a series so a little slow to get started as they are setting everything up. A lot of potential but felt pretty meh.
The misfits at Olivia's job are a few too many and it feels a little crowded and leaving little space for any of the characters, perhaps if they were fewer we could focus on building a connection to them?
This womans diet… bad coffee for breakfast, cheeseburger and fries for breakfast/lunch (she does say at one point that it’s her daily cheeseburger) and then some chips and cookies for snacks in the evening… she must be supernatural eating that.
Also, she’s on her way to her brother in San Diego when he car breaks down in Arizona. Maybe I missed it but I don’t remember her ever call him or having him mentioned again. “Haven’t heard from my sister in a week after she said she was driving here, I’m sure she’s fine.”
First in a series so a little slow to get started as they are setting everything up. A lot of potential but felt pretty meh.
The misfits at Olivia's job are a few too many and it feels a little crowded and leaving little space for any of the characters, perhaps if they were fewer we could focus on building a connection to them?
This womans diet… bad coffee for breakfast, cheeseburger and fries for breakfast/lunch (she does say at one point that it’s her daily cheeseburger) and then some chips and cookies for snacks in the evening… she must be supernatural eating that.
Also, she’s on her way to her brother in San Diego when he car breaks down in Arizona. Maybe I missed it but I don’t remember her ever call him or having him mentioned again. “Haven’t heard from my sister in a week after she said she was driving here, I’m sure she’s fine.”