Pallas Poppies
I really wanted to like this one. Sounded like so much fun, cozy mystery set in Dublins drag queen world. A drag queen cozy and it’s Irish, I’m there, take my money.
But it was poorly written. I started thinking it was self published with all these odd sentences and bad pace and threads here and there feeling so off and ugh. And I didn’t like the characters either, our MC never listens to everyone “Huh, sorry?” whenever someone is talking to here and the fight with her roommate felt like kids.
A drag queen, walking in someone elses heels on a very rainy night slips and falls? No, that could never happen, never, it must have been murder. Okay.
I do believe there’s a decent story there but this is bad first draft that needs work. It was a mess.
I really wanted to like this one. Sounded like so much fun, cozy mystery set in Dublins drag queen world. A drag queen cozy and it’s Irish, I’m there, take my money.
But it was poorly written. I started thinking it was self published with all these odd sentences and bad pace and threads here and there feeling so off and ugh. And I didn’t like the characters either, our MC never listens to everyone “Huh, sorry?” whenever someone is talking to here and the fight with her roommate felt like kids.
A drag queen, walking in someone elses heels on a very rainy night slips and falls? No, that could never happen, never, it must have been murder. Okay.
I do believe there’s a decent story there but this is bad first draft that needs work. It was a mess.